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    dots Submission Name: simpledots
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    Author: k kin
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 56/51/12
    Words: 2
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       thats how everything really is and really should be.think about it.


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    dotssimpledots
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    simple....




    Submitted on 2004-12-01 22:04:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You know what I agree 100% it should all be simple but don't you think the harder things are the more interesting life is. Just a thought.
    | Posted on 2004-12-01 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
      This was exactly what it said...simple. Which is good, dont get me wrong, but It is quite boring. Was this just a test...as you are new to this? If so then *puts on big fake grin* That was lovely and inspiring, I do hope you keep writing the same old chap!
    | Posted on 2004-12-01 00:00:00 | by Jane Lost | [ Reply to This ]
      Your idea is good that it should be simple, but not that simple. you need to expand on this idea. But i would not consider this "poem" a poem. I dont really know what u wanted people to think of this, but its not really writing, its a word!
    | Posted on 2004-12-01 00:00:00 | by tss120 | [ Reply to This ]
      I can relate! Great write! Love the [[flow, wording, rhyme]]. You rock!!

    I have to admit...this is pretty funny...

    I have a wordy one on procrastination "I'll get around to it"

    Let me know if you revise this (^_~)
    | Posted on 2004-12-01 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]
      It's simple.

    Poetry wrecks lives.

    Victor.

    See!

    It's simple.

    simple simple simple simple simple simple simple
    simple simple simple simple simple simple simple
    | Posted on 2004-12-02 00:00:00 | by Torie | [ Reply to This ]
      Well- can’t argue with that one… But the grammar is horrible! Lolfull! Took me all fu<king day to read too! Damn you!
    Peace, love and huggles- ~#6-
    | Posted on 2004-12-02 00:00:00 | by Six_Grey | [ Reply to This ]


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