This was exactly what it said...simple. Which is good, dont get me wrong, but It is quite boring. Was this just a test...as you are new to this? If so then *puts on big fake grin* That was lovely and inspiring, I do hope you keep writing the same old chap!
Your idea is good that it should be simple, but not that simple. you need to expand on this idea. But i would not consider this "poem" a poem. I dont really know what u wanted people to think of this, but its not really writing, its a word!