I like the challenge that rings out at the end of this poem. Can you take it? It's a good question, and I can imagine you, hip and eyebrow cocked, asking it. Your eyes say, no, I don't think you can. Haha.
I noticed a few errors you know and since this is your featured piece I'm going to highlight them for you, so maybe it's not a great suggestion to help, but maybe it's something in the proper spirit!
The strength that you admire so is reflected through smoked mirrors. Behind the stage <there's> nothing more <than> a frightened little girl choking on her tears.
The beauty that holds your gaze and causes lust to stir <Gets> applied every morning like a <knight's> protective armor.
The figure that you long to hold, kiss and <possess>. Comes gift wrapped in pink paper... Victoria's Secret and <Frederick's.>
The sense of humor that <places> a smile upon your face <,> Camouflages all <these feelings> of depair, loneliness and disgrace.
Here I stand and hand over the bare ass naked <truth>. No more lies, deceits or make <believe> Can you still love what's before you?
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I don't mean to nitpick but I noticed no one had done that, so you know . . . doing my part and all that! I'm a perfectionist when it comes to poetry, so please, don't beat me down!
I liked the delivery and in-your-face of this. Just a little polish for this gem!
i love the imagery you use and the message that a man usually looks at women as just a sexual experience. i love how you challenge them into looking deeper, underneath the makeup and the sexy clothes and see the real person women really are. brilliant absolutely brilliant and a beautiful message. keep it up you are a very talented writer and a great inspiration
interesting thought what people hold inside themselves during life innocence and dirty deeds done I am not sure if you read my subission mirrors or unknown but it explains life. you used a good imagery process i enjoyed the write nice job sandman