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    dots Submission Name: Bypolordots
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    Author: poetsoul
    ASL Info:    17/f/cali
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 109/151/32
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Misc/Comedy
    Total Views: 433
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 346



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    dotsBypolordots
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    scream at me,
    smile and apologize.
    cry your heart out for nothing,
    then smile at my confusion.
    keep me at a distance,
    hug me to close.
    thrive for my attention,
    suffocate from my presence.
    someone once said:
    "bypolor: opposites attract"....
    he must have been bypolor.




    Submitted on 2004-12-02 13:34:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Well then he would go from attracting to repelling because bi polar (correct spelling)
    patients would switch back and forth.
    But again, a good idea to work with.
    Kind of like planting seeds that will grow into more if you let them work in the back of your mind.
    Dave
    | Posted on 2004-12-02 00:00:00 | by Sandburg | [ Reply to This ]
      thought provoking and sensible, few write about the subject and this was a delightful read other than (bi polar)...good job...Bob:)
    | Posted on 2004-12-02 00:00:00 | by poetryman | [ Reply to This ]
      first off: bi polar... and i believe Hug me to close...the to should be too... I saw. I liked. I like the smiling at confusion line, very well put. Cheerios!
    | Posted on 2004-12-02 00:00:00 | by BenevolantWords | [ Reply to This ]
      very interesting topic i have had quite a few relatives and people close by me suffer from that disorder,thanx it was funny seeing their faces through your words from my perceptive it gave me a big laugh that i needed,great piece great thought one day i might write something about it probably already have my mother is by polar so i lived it 43 years crasy stuff enjoyed your write
    sandman
    | Posted on 2004-12-02 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      hehe i love this sooo much i will so be keeping this in mind to read over and over and over. but you spelled "bypolor" wrong its bipolar
    other then that it was good. i had to read it the write and read were both awesomely wonderfulistic... i had to make up a word to describe this. wow

    love tina
    | Posted on 2004-12-02 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]



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