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    dots Submission Name: Sorrydots
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    Author: B Adams
    ASL Info:    18 Male Canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 41/59/12
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Sorry
    Total Views: 849
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 576



    Description:
       why ask forgiveness, when you could write it down?


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    dotsSorrydots
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    I donít know how to fix it
    I donít know where to start
    I donít care if you believe me
    But this oneís from the heart
    I know I did entice you
    Your rage I did inflame
    I now regret the hurtfulness
    And am aware that Iím at blame
    I know our words are cutting
    As I know that we will mend
    Whereís the point in fighting
    When youíre swinging at a friend?
    So with all arguments aside
    Forget about the glory
    I canít forgive myself for hurting you
    So all thatís left, is sorry




    Submitted on 2004-12-02 15:10:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Awsome that was really beautiful B adams my name is christina and I'm new so save me the time umm it was really good I liked it alot. keep in touch
    Love aways chrsitina aka babyface
    | Posted on 2004-12-10 00:00:00 | by POETRY | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, this was good, alot of people write on this sort of topic(including myself) but you made it unique, great write it almost made me cry!
    | Posted on 2004-12-02 00:00:00 | by poetsoul | [ Reply to This ]
      another wow, I really enjoyed it. There is so much feeling in it and im sure most people can relate to the topic. great stuff.
    | Posted on 2004-12-02 00:00:00 | by sone | [ Reply to This ]
      great job.. i loved the flow and everything but i think it would have been better if it said im sorry but thats just my opinion.. nice job tho..
    | Posted on 2004-12-02 00:00:00 | by AnointedPoetess | [ Reply to This ]


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