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    Author: poetsoul
    ASL Info:    17/f/cali
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 109/151/32
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Misc/Sorry
    Total Views: 280
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    caught between life and hell,
    but you never could see the difference.
    to old to cry,
    to to sober to laugh,
    to young to die.
    we loved to listen to cobains songs,
    but we allways did have different meanings to them.
    you heard the suicide in his voice,
    and i recognized the trapt soul
    because i saw it everyday in you.
    i remembered how you allways pushed your limits,
    cut a little deeper,went a little further.
    take another hit because its not about the high.
    i only just realized your limit was to die.
    i was in deep with you,
    but i managed to climb out...slowly.
    i tried to pull you through,
    i blame myself
    i was the one to push you in




    Submitted on 2004-12-02 15:32:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a poem with a lot of feeling, I can definitely understand your feeling of guilt because you may have introduced a different lifestyle to someone but your not guilty. A person has to make their own desicions, I'm very sorry for your loss.
    Nice heartfelt poem.
    | Posted on 2004-12-02 00:00:00 | by The Black Rose | [ Reply to This ]
      To me in my own opinion i think it was great, done with alot of feeling. i can relate to the fact because of past experience. i think that it is a great write. the poem spoke to me in its own words. the way you wrote that piece, was spectacular. keep it up.
    | Posted on 2004-12-03 00:00:00 | by Solemn Star 88 | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem really gave me a feeling of sorrow as i read it. I really respect both yourself and the person you talk about in this poem. It seems you both bore with dignity your burdens. It is great that you can word this piece so well considering it seems like such a tender subject. I like it alot.
    Laura
    | Posted on 2004-12-05 00:00:00 | by etheariac | [ Reply to This ]



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