i like how you're pissed off that you're the nice guy at heart, and this [censored] won't just appreciate that and give you back with you've given them. eh. selfish [censored]s are abound. :0) i know what you're going through. just never become one of the [censored]s out of hurt :)
I like this poem...it could use some work on the wordage but overall I liked it because what I got from it, was it is about dreams. And being there and pushing for someone elses while they shoot yours down. I completely relate to this. I like the metaphore you used though...bubbles. its cute. You have a great start...just come back and revise it...let me know if you do:) ~jane
Submission Name: Still Bubbles Burst
