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    dots Submission Name: Fertiledots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsFertiledots
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    I fear the fertile creative periods
    for I fear my sadness,
    but it's as necessary for me as air.
    I'm afraid of my vigor
    because writing saps my energy
    and gives me energy.
    Food and sleep become afterthoughts.
    I feel like a candle with a hundred wicks
    at each end--all lit,
    but there's a gale blowing.
    I pray at least one still burns,
    and Morpheus will transmit
    a clever plot into my mind
    for me to record
    for these open-eyed dreams
    never satisfy.




    Submitted on 2004-03-19 20:30:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Amy,
    A very good write.. I applaud you for putting into words the addiction that the muse can be for some of us... I often find myself skipping meals when the muse hits.. and forcing myself away from the computer...unsaticfied.
    jan
    | Posted on 2004-03-20 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]


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