Wow. Perfect in every sense of the word. I can't find anything to alter, or anything to change at all. Wow, and that doesn't happen very pften to me. *smiles*
As stated, there is nothing that I would change about this poem had I written this piece myself. Absolutely nothing. The message of Love. Of a True Love. It comes in so many variations, packages, forms and sizes. Both large and small. Thin and wide, but says the same nonetheless.
You captured in this piece perfectly what so many poets to date have struggled to do I believe. I really look forward to reading some more of your works. Truly excellent my friend. Take Care.