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Summer is a Sunburnt Lie

Author: painofthanatos
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Class/Type: Poetry /Being a Teen
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eh, not my best...

Summer is a Sunburnt Lie

Summer is a sunburnt lie
A broken promise of freedom
Every year in June
The schools promise students the same thing
A summer of freedom
A time in which work is through
A time just for them
Until September rolls along
But this is a promise broken
Summer is suppose to be freedom
Summer is suppose to be
Sleeping late
Staying up all night
Lying around the house
Not lifting a finger
Freedom is not
Working 9-5
Cleaning your room
Walking your mother’s dog
All of that is work
The work of a naïve and sunburnt youth

Submitted on 2004-12-06 11:47:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  It’s tru- all tru- the heartbreak and double talk that the double dealing season reeks on all of our souls! You told it! And him! And now I’m off to eat a taco! Mmmmmmmm... Peace, love and...munch~ munch- chew* Numaaa hhhixxx- (wait- a mouthful does not effect typing- A MOUTHFUL DOES NOT EFFECT TYPING!)
| Posted on 2005-01-31 00:00:00 | by Six_Grey | [ Reply to This ]
  Yes you were lied too,lol you did capture the angst of so many students and it was well written. There's nothing to improve on this poem,mostly because why would you want to make it any longer, save the time for something fun.
| Posted on 2004-12-09 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]
  good, i hated summer because of all that crap. sadly enough honey summers only get worse as you get older, and eventually you don't even get a "summer vacation" at least not longer than mayber 2 weeks. but this write is a good description of the falseness of summer**
| Posted on 2005-01-04 00:00:00 | by _winky_ | [ Reply to This ]

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