Description: I wrote this when i thought i knew what love was. I was NOT in love when i wrote this. I just wanted to be loved so badly but it was a bad breakup but i guess thats where i get my inspiration. Luckily i have someone who cares now
If I knew a way to get you back
I’d do it no questions asked
If I got you back into my arms
I’d never frown again
If you told me you loved me
I’d probably cry a million tears
If i could spend one day with you
I’d tell you what was exactly in my heart
If i could go back to one day
I’d go back to the day i first saw you
If I ever said anything wrong
I’d take it back
If there was something you didn’t like
I’d change it for you
What I’m trying to say is...
No one else can have my love
like you have it
I’ll love you always N forever
cuz your the one I’ll always treasure
this was cute, but it's not my type of style. it was sort of that elementary school rhyme scheme, with that 'girl longing after boy that she's madly in "love" with' lines...sorry. that was mean...it's just not my preferred type of writing. i find this type of writing immature, and boring. luckily there's a world full of people with different tastes. :) keep writing.
This is cute, it sounds like something that I would write for Ben or something, I don't know... I have been having these really strange images lately, about other people, and you would think that is just mad because I just tattooed his name on my arm, I guess its just nerves or something. I felt really bad this weekend, cuz ben just didn't treat me like he usually does, I understand that he was mad about his bank account mix up thingy, but it just didn't feel close like usual, I felt like I just went through pain for nothing, maybe I am just thinking to much, lmao... this is nice, a nice poem, it helped me get that little bit out of my head.
really liked this poem, It kind of explains how love is very confusing at least to me, my favorite part in this poem would be "If i could go back to one day I’d go back to the day i first saw you If I ever said anything wrong I’d take it back If there was something you didn’t like I’d change it for you" because it says you were willing for the change just to keep something dear
It's a beautiful poem, I think it was written from the heart and that's what it makes it special. I think I felt identified with it because that's exactly the way I felt a few months ago. I guess that's how it is to be in love!
"If I knew a way to get you back, I’d do it no questions asked.
If I got you back into my arms, I’d never frown again.
If you told me you loved me, I’d probably cry a million tears.
If I could spend one day with you I’d tell you what was exactly in my heart.
If I could go back to one day, I’d go back to the day I first saw you.
If I ever said anything wrong, I’d take it back instantly.
If there was something you didn’t like, I’d change everything for you.
What I’m trying to say is... No one else can have my love, like you have it. I’ll love you always and forever, "Cuz you're the one I’ll always treasure."
This is a great poem I just patched up a couple grammatical errors, and changed the format. My reasoning behind the two per stanza is because each is a different complete thought, and it also makes your poem appear more presentable. Cute piece though, love stinks doesnt it?
This is the way i feel all the time...My love is everything to me and i know just what you mean...it makes me feel ok to know people out there feel the same as me when it comes to the ones they love...keep do what your doing and i will keep reading and enjoying them.