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    dots Submission Name: Dear Charliedots
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    Author: ashlee_jane2003
    ASL Info:    24-female-Indianapolis
    Elite Ratio:    3.39 - 210/210/39
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 303
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 772



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       I'm just trying out something new here. Feel free to rip it all apart.


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    dotsDear Charliedots
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    Dear Baby,
    I can't believe that I found you... I am so happy.

    Dear Sweetie,
    Last night was great, can't wait to see you again.

    Dear Charlie,
    Do you remember that day in the park? It was so beautiful... I still have that flower.

    Dear Charles,
    Why haven't you called? Is everything ok? I miss you!


    Dear Charles,
    Please call me. I'm worried. Did I do something wrong?

    Dear Punk Ass Bitch,
    You're so low, how could you do this to me? I never did anything to you. You can't even call me.

    Dear Charlie,
    I wish I never found you. I'm sorry... this is the end...I never stopped loving you. Goodbye.




    Submitted on 2004-12-06 15:21:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Wow. I'm thinking one night stand. The outcome of which resulted in several voicemails and or notes left for Charlie.

    *Raises eyebrows*

    Did he ever get them?

    Did he ever care?

    Or did caring and compassion once again come to late in a cruel world?

    ~BCute
    | Posted on 2005-05-04 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]
      i'm impressed, i don't think ive seen this formula before, its real unique and i liek ur hidden messages well i don't know if they're hidden messages but i liked the way u expressed yourself.
    personally i don't think u should anything unless ive missed typos or something i liek it just the way it is..
    keep writing
    -danny
    | Posted on 2004-12-06 00:00:00 | by dannyshyboy | [ Reply to This ]
      Meh.. I'm not quite fond of this one... although I understood it well. I think it is a decent piece, but it just doesn't click. Sorry to say that. I do like the feeling behind it.. the love for someone who abruptly turns their back.
    | Posted on 2004-12-06 00:00:00 | by Dark Angel | [ Reply to This ]
      LMFAO! Not too sure what you were trying to get across here. but as far as laughs go...it had me rolling.

    I could just invision this light hearted sweet faced love struck girl leaving these romantic messages on an answering machine...then I saw this same girl turn into a bunny boiling, hiding in the shrubs chemicaly imbalanced peeping Tom. lol
    | Posted on 2004-12-06 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]



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