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    dots Submission Name: met in lovedots
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    Author: ceestyl
    ASL Info:    18/m/az
    Elite Ratio:    3.34 - 64/57/22
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1025
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    Bytes: 585



    Description:
       This is about my girlfriend... she's like the only girl i really cared about, I let myself open to her, I let myself get attatched and haven't felt like this forever, really good feeling.... who would have thought, barely feeling first love..


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    The first time we met, I fell in love with your eyes, and all of your curves from your feet to the skys.
    The second time we met I fell in love once more looking you over my jaw hit the floor
    The third time we met I fell in love with your song, and then with your lips, from there i was hung
    The forth time we met I fell in love with your peace, just watching you sleep, smiles were released
    The fifth time we met, onto much more, my key just left, right out the door, and into your hand, just know that its true, all of these meetings led me to love you....




    Submitted on 2004-12-06 16:57:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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