I agree while this poem could be taken in a passion sense. It could be about so many other things. It was throwing in different scenes, different ways I could relate to this. It could even represent a platonic relationship, an argument inside yourself even, I think. But, I'm weird. So..go figure. ~BCute
Heh, well, i guess it can be about sex but it can also be about other things. I really thought it was about writing but ive always been a bit naive Whatever its meaning is, i think it's a good poem and quite sad.
P.S. Good luck with your relationship. I hope everything turns out for the better for you!
you seem to have captured the true essence of writing here...the beauty that forms from such a simple act is very much like sex in a way...so i believe it makes an effective metaphor...even if it was unintentional. I really like your visual style of presenting emotion...thanks for the read
i didnt read the descrption, as a matter of policy, and then having read the poem it gives it a totally different message, i really thought it was about having sex with someone for the last time, i know it sounds crude but when you break up with someone the last of everything seems so significant...the last time you kissed, etc. so i thought it was quite clever but didn't understand the 'a corner where you once pressed me' now i do i think that its very interesting how completely different the interpretations could be. ellisa