i just gotta say YAY FOR YOU! like seriously... sounds like all the waiting has paid off... when you could maybe have taken second best coz you were lonely or whatever you didnt and here you are now with (what sounds like) the most amazing girlee you could ever imagine... thats something to be damn yay about! and ooo... it sounds like shes sure a lucky girl to have someone who is able to put feelings/emotions into words... i sure hope your telling her all these things you write... yay for you again! ciao for now!
I agree this was kind of wierd to read. It didn't make sense in places. Some places the rhyming sounded kind of forced. I think the topic of this was good. You are going somewhere with it. I can sense the emotion. Just kind of hard to read.