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    Author: Karios
    Elite Ratio:    4.13 - 126/129/49
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Rant/Depressed
    Total Views: 1593
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 132



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    Please do not violate the TOS in the future.

    EDIT: Posted by some childish boy/girl who has a grudge. Grow up please.




    Submitted on 2004-12-07 21:25:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Your [censored] poem sucks.

    Die mother [censored]er.

    TOS = Violated.

    | Posted on 2009-09-12 00:00:00 | by HisNameIsNoMore | [ Reply to This ]
      That's okay. Everything is deleted, with some sort of pretense that I disobeyed the rules. I haven't. However, to whomever did this, I wonder what makes you think that you are allowed to destroy something special to another? Childish. Ridiculous. Keep trying.
    | Posted on 2009-09-12 00:00:00 | by Karios | [ Reply to This ]
      your poems are interesting because you write about emotions which society has taught people to censor.

    some people might be taken aback but such poems but I honestly like them and find them to be refreshing and unique... I have not read many like these.. and that is a GOOD sign.
    | Posted on 2005-06-27 00:00:00 | by Redstarr | [ Reply to This ]
      You are one spiritual person,bravo

    I think you capture only one side in this poem, I think you can expand this good poem, to add balance to it or go with more detail of why the dark is a path no one would want to go. You did already slightly touch on ot though.
    | Posted on 2004-12-09 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi first of all welcome to this site.
    Now to your poem a very nice and soulful poem.
    I have described it very well how it feels to be him, him the dark angle.
    Good job, keep it up love shabnam
    | Posted on 2004-12-08 00:00:00 | by shabnam | [ Reply to This ]
      hmmm, its not too bac, i think you should revise it, and try to make a littl emore sence out of it, but other than that it was ok...
    Solemn Star
    | Posted on 2004-12-07 00:00:00 | by Solemn Star 88 | [ Reply to This ]
      Do I sense bitterness? This is very good and.. angry I guess would be a good word to describe it. I don't know. I can't make up my mind if I really like this piece or not, but you did do some nice work with it. Good job.
    | Posted on 2004-12-07 00:00:00 | by Bijou de Mort | [ Reply to This ]


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