That's okay. Everything is deleted, with some sort of pretense that I disobeyed the rules. I haven't. However, to whomever did this, I wonder what makes you think that you are allowed to destroy something special to another? Childish. Ridiculous. Keep trying.
I think you capture only one side in this poem, I think you can expand this good poem, to add balance to it or go with more detail of why the dark is a path no one would want to go. You did already slightly touch on ot though.
Do I sense bitterness? This is very good and.. angry I guess would be a good word to describe it. I don't know. I can't make up my mind if I really like this piece or not, but you did do some nice work with it. Good job.