hehe...who doesn't need a little chocolate every once in a while...yummy...now i want a candy bar maybe a big piece of chocolate cake with lots of frosting...or maybe a big bowl of icecream...yummy...thanks now i'm hungry...lol.,..i enjoyed this sweet write...we need writes like these thrown in the mix of depression , confusion and love...smiles purp
Awesome. Finally an uplifting poem. I know I'm not aiding in getting the site out of the stage of depression its in. But, I just am not a happy person right now. I'm glad you posted this though. Made me smile. That's saying something. ~BCute
A light refreshing break forom the doom and gloom everyone seems to write...including me i'll admit...thanks for putting something up that i didn't have to pull apart or analyse: i could just enjoy it...you've got great flow there...thanks again for the read: it was highly enjoyable
hehe... i know what you mean.. mmm.. chocolate. this is a very cute poem... written nicely.. although good and food dont rhyme so it throws your rhyme scheme off a little... they should rhyme though... hehe... my ex boyfriend used to always get on my case about my chocolate addiction... or any sweet for the most part... it makes you feel good and its oh, so delicious! this is a nice ode to a wonderful snack..
heheh i got a real kick out of this piece this is well written i wouldnt change a thing in this one i could almost taste it myself i have to admit you wrote of my most favourite foodstuff woohoo thank you so much i enjoyed this