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    Author: JKPS613
    ASL Info:    17 / f / GA / USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.99 - 388/377/47
    Words: 670
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 539
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 4434



    Description:
       Okay, it's a skit, alright? So, help me out here, because it's for school and I think it kinda blows right now, so seriously!!! HELP!!!! And title it, please!!!!


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    Cast:
    Jenny
    Kyle
    Ralph
    Christie
    Elise

    The setting is in a lunchroom. To get this point across, have the actors pantomime eating and drinking.
    Props: book bags, a bible, and at least two tables, two of them with four chairs. Christie should be wearing a watch.

    Jenny:
    Kyle, that party Friday night was so cool!

    Kyle:
    Yeah, it was, wasn't it?

    Ralph:
    The way you pranked those freshmen was awesome!

    Kyle:
    Freshmen are such losers.

    Jenny:
    (Making an expression of disgust)
    Oh, no, here comes one of them now. What's that girl’s name?

    Ralph:
    Who knows?

    Kyle:
    Who cares? (Ralph and Kyle laugh as Christie approaches, smiling)

    Christie:
    Hey, Jenny! Hey Ralph, hey Kyle.

    Jenny:
    Um . . . hi . . . what's your name, again?

    Christie:
    (Faltering a little, but still smiling)
    Um . . . it's Christie.

    Jenny:
    Oh, right. Yeah, well, hi.

    Christie:
    I was just wondering if I could sit with you guys.

    Ralph:
    (Snickering with Kyle)
    Don't you have any loser freshman to hang out with?

    Jenny:
    Yeah? I mean, can't you see that we're (takes book bag and places it on the seat next to her) full?

    Christie:
    Oh . . . of course . . . sorry! (Turns and walks away quickly to an empty table and sits down)

    Elise:
    (Entering into the room, sees Christie by herself at a table and comes over)
    Hey, Christie! What's up? Mind if I sit with you?

    Christie:
    (Not looking up)
    Hey, Elise. Wouldn't you rather go sit with all your junior friends instead of a freshman loser like me?

    Elise:
    (Sitting down)
    What are you talking about?

    Christie:
    I just asked Jenny and her friends if I could sit with them - and she totally blew me off! Gosh, she's only a year older than me! She was a freshman, too!

    Elise:
    (Opening her book bag and taking out a bible)
    You know the Bible talks about this.

    Christie:
    (Looking up, interested)
    Really? What does it say?

    Elise:
    (Opening her Bible to marked verse)
    Well, it says in 1 Samuel 12:22 that, "The Lord will not reject his people, because the Lord was pleased to make you His own." Basically, although some people may act like total jerks and ignore you, it's okay, because the Lord never ignores His own.

    Christie:
    Oh . . . anything else? I think it's going to take more than one verse to make me feel better.

    Elise:
    I understand. There’s probably something in the New Testament. Here, let me look. (Pauses and flips through a little) Um, in Mark chapter 8, Jesus is talking to his disciples. Verse 31 says that, "He then began to teach them that the Son of Man must suffer many things and be rejected by the elders, chief priests, and teacher of the law."

    Christie:
    Didn't even his homeland reject him? I think I heard Pastor Jay talk about that a few Sundays ago.

    Elise:
    Right! I mean, these people were rejecting their Savior, the guy they had been waiting for! Jesus went through all sorts of rejection, but he always loved and forgave his persecutors.

    Christie:
    Kinda makes me feel like my problem was sort of . . . well, insignificant.

    Elise:
    Yeah, I know the feeling! But Jesus still loves us, in spite of all our problems and worries.

    Christie:
    (Smiling)
    Hey, I'm starting to feel better already! I guess I can't stay mad at Jenny and all them. It wouldn't be right, not after what Jesus went through for me - and for them!

    Elise:
    Well, that's good. But maybe you should go - don't you have class in a few minutes?

    Christie:
    (Checking her watch)
    Oh, my gosh! You're right! I better hurry! (Gets up and leaves)

    Elise:
    (Laughing a little)
    Bye! (Resumes reading her Bible)




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    ||| Comments |||
      Perhaps I should read the description...afterall..this kind of thing is what they are for! haha...well
    The title should pertain to the subject matter assigned by your school...what is it?? I threw a few simplistic titles around for ya already..
    Lunch
    About last night.
    Hardback savior
    Righteous formation of self-loathing.
    haha...most of these were jokes...
    | Posted on 2003-12-17 00:00:00 | by MyX | [ Reply to This ]
      Whats the point of the charactors if they have no part in the story? Lengthen this out...make it a play, not a skit. And for crying out loud...let the juniors prevail before whipping the bible out...or else you'll never make a point with that piece of literature (bible) in your hands...please respond to me on this one...
    | Posted on 2003-12-17 00:00:00 | by MyX | [ Reply to This ]
      I dont know... im reading this right now... but im kinda toasty and its not making sense... were you picked on as a freshmen?? (just to let you know ... i never picked on freshmen)
    | Posted on 2003-12-15 00:00:00 | by AkostaNostra | [ Reply to This ]
      the beginning was really good, the dialogue is very natural... but the ending was far too fast. It was just like, WHOO here's a bible! and Christie was like oh... OK!!! It was just too fast. ~Coraz
    | Posted on 2003-12-15 00:00:00 | by Cora Windover | [ Reply to This ]



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