This life that you construct
Really, is it so hard to
Find the one thing that
You most love in the world?
You, beautiful as you are, missing
That you will need
And may never have. Do
You ever try
To see the truth?
To get the answer read the second word in each verse
lol wanting me to comment on your poem alright then.. hmm..
i can see the question you have formed in the mind of others that read this.. "Really is it so hard to find the one thing you love most in this world?" that one sticks out to me.. and i'm sure it does to everyone else that reads it.. it makes people see if they are even trying.. if they have lost the desire to look anymore.. at least that is what it says to me.. this poem is one that forces others to consider.. and that is why i think you have done an excellent job with this one :-P.. well have fun.. much love
I liked this. I don't usually go for short poetry. But you completely changed my outlook. The feelings and emtions you summed up in this piece are astounding. Wow. Completely awesome. I like it a lot. ~BCute
I really like this. It's questioning yourself and what you should supposedly have. In the end after you read the second word in each line it all makes sense. Nothing like that could measure up to life's beauty. Really creative write. :) -blt