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    dots Submission Name: Answerdots

    Author: Kera
    ASL Info:    18-f-NH
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 116/129/29
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
    Total Views: 894
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       heh not much of a poem oh well....

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    This life that you construct
    Really, is it so hard to
    Find the one thing that
    You most love in the world?
    You, beautiful as you are, missing
    One thing
    That you will need
    And may never have. Do
    You ever try
    To see the truth?

    To get the answer read the second word in each verse

    Submitted on 2004-12-08 22:54:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      lol wanting me to comment on your poem alright then.. hmm..

    i can see the question you have formed in the mind of others that read this.. "Really is it so hard to find the one thing you love most in this world?" that one sticks out to me.. and i'm sure it does to everyone else that reads it.. it makes people see if they are even trying.. if they have lost the desire to look anymore.. at least that is what it says to me..
    this poem is one that forces others to consider.. and that is why i think you have done an excellent job with this one :-P..
    well have fun.. much love

    | Posted on 2004-12-09 00:00:00 | by Pyrosis | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this. I don't usually go for short poetry. But you completely changed my outlook. The feelings and emtions you summed up in this piece are astounding. Wow. Completely awesome. I like it a lot.
    | Posted on 2004-12-09 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this. Short, simple, and it gets the message across. It's original, as well, which I don't see very often. Nice job.

    | Posted on 2004-12-09 00:00:00 | by Jester_Gesture | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this. It's questioning yourself and what you should supposedly have. In the end after you read the second word in each line it all makes sense. Nothing like that could measure up to life's beauty. Really creative write. :)
    | Posted on 2004-12-08 00:00:00 | by borderlinetears | [ Reply to This ]

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