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    dots Submission Name: A Glance...dots
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    Author: painfullyme
    ASL Info:    23/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 335/456/72
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Prose/Depressed
    Total Views: 435
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    Bytes: 737



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       the first line came to me while drifting to sleep. the rest just poured onto the page.


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    dotsA Glance...dots
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    A Glance at Infinite Sleep by
    Those Who Yearn to Find it

    How amazing it is that a half inch sphere keeps self-annihilation from my midst. That a tiny orb provides a small shred of hope to keep death at bay. Imagine being able to stare finality straight in the face but not being able to cross that threshold to eternity beause of a minute capsule given to those who long for an end by those who fear what lies on the other side of forever. If only we, the few who no longer despair fatality, could show those who still find obliteration distressful the smooth path to ruination. Then maybe those who crave to understand us may find solace in our choices.

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    Submitted on 2004-12-08 23:01:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      is this about being medicated? the capsule that keeps death away.. that's what i got from it...
    you have a typo in the second line...
    this theory of yours could never work.. though it's rather selfish of people to want you to keep your life for thier own reasons... not taking into account your own reasons for wanting to die... not everyone could ever be able to understand... and if they did there would be a lot of death in this world.. if no one feared death, more people would not only kill themselves ( i feel its not any of my business personally.. they can do what they want) but kill others as well.. because no one would care... it would make it easier, i think...
    it is kind of funny that little pills keep so many people from death everyday.. especially those that want to die.. it's like your saving your own life everyday..
    | Posted on 2004-12-08 00:00:00 | by besodemuerte | [ Reply to This ]



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