Stupid Bitch!!!! by sweet-fire

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Submission Name: Stupid Bitch!!!! dots

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Author:	sweet-fire
ASL Info:	21/f/ky
Elite Ratio:	3.8 - 296/279/42
Words:	104

Class/Type:	Poetry/Angry
Total Views:	314
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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this was just written today. i almost got into a fight this morning and i regret that i didnt hit the bitch. its not the best but i thought id share my feelings with the world...or something...

Stupid Bitch!!!! dots

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Your a stupid bitch
and i hate your guts!
Come near me and
ill fill your face with cuts!

You run your mouth
to damn much!
I want to put my hands
around your neck and clutch!

Ive had it with you!
No more chances!
Its not in me to be nice
under the circumstances.

So im gonna let my fist
connect with your eye,
and sit back to watch
as you start to cry.

I feel nothing for you.
Nothing at all.
Ill kill anyone who
gets in the path of your fall!

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  absolutedly truthful. i feel like this everyday that i go to work (i work in a juvenile rehabilitation facility) and the kids hurt staff for getting into fights with other girls. truth hurts and this is the truth.
erin
| Posted on 2006-01-17 00:00:00 | by devonsmom03 | [ Reply to This ]
  Whoever you wrote this about must have done something to really make you mad. I've never read anything like this before. I hope that you didn't really hurt the person you wrote this about and you two resolved your differences. If not I hope you two do resolve them before one of you ends up hurt or worse dead. I like it though because that's what I do when I don't want anyone to really know what I'm feeling out loud. I write it all down. It makes me feel a lot better than what I did. Keep writing what you feel you will feel better.
| Posted on 2005-02-08 00:00:00 | by manda_bear | [ Reply to This ]
  yeah, someone can write a good [censored] piece! this is good. to many times have i felt this way about someone and i just walked away before doing it. damn that sucks. but anyway, good write, keep it up**
| Posted on 2004-12-12 00:00:00 | by _winky_ | [ Reply to This ]
  haha...I liked this one:P Anger filled:) Looks like everyone else likes it too, lol. Dont let her get to ya...ok, thats hard...but uhm...ok, maybe not. KILL HER! haha, one less loud mouth in the world...go after Hanna next...lol, thatd be fun...hmm...ok, buy now:)

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| Posted on 2004-12-09 00:00:00 | by drk_angl_17 | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow really deep feallings. I like it alot how it flowed.The stanza's where great i thought.hope to read more of our work.keep on wrigting
| Posted on 2004-12-09 00:00:00 | by theman | [ Reply to This ]
  Hmmmmm. I wrote a poem called "Stupid B*tch" as well. Funny. This was okay. I think that it sounded kind of young though. But 18? I guess that is young. You were pretty mad. I could feel that. I understand completely where you are coming from. Amuzing write. Just don't do anything stupid that you'll regret later in life.
| Posted on 2004-12-09 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow, this is [censored] great...haha...i can difinatly relate to this poem...it shows a lot of emothion and anger...the first and last stanza's are the best to me...haha..
"Your a stupid [censored]
and i hate your guts!
Come near me and
ill fill your face with cuts!"

"I feel nothing for you.
Nothing at all.
Ill kill anyone who
gets in the path of your fall"

Those are absolutly wonderfull...and i think that this poem has true feelings in it..haha...good luck with it
| Posted on 2004-12-09 00:00:00 | by EnHakkore | [ Reply to This ]

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