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    dots Submission Name: how i feel for youdots
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    Author: UNunderStood
    ASL Info:    16/f/oh
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 79/87/25
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 847
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 778



    Description:
       this poem has been given to me by a friend in evise thanks


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    How i feel for you
    i tried to prolong my feeling for you
    for as long as i possibly could,
    i want to announce my love for
    you but i'm not sure i should.
    i have such a great amount of
    Anticipation built up inside
    And at this point it's Getting
    to hard to hide.
    I have such a fascination for
    You like this is just a fling,
    i get so excited when i see you
    into your arms i just wanna spring.
    Now more and more my love for you
    Gradually grows stronger,
    i wanna emerge through all boundaries,
    I can't wait no longer.
    My love for you in a million years
    still wont stop,
    And on my list of lovers
    You'll always be on top...




    Submitted on 2004-12-09 11:57:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great friend. This was very sweet. I remember the days that friends wrote friends and so on. Oh the days. You must have been flattered if this was referring to you. I would have been. I probably would have melted. Cute. Very cute. Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2004-12-09 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]


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