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    Author: AnointedPoetess
    ASL Info:    22/Fe/MN
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 127/178/49
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Gifted that i am,

    But needing my gift to be openly shown,

    For the world to see,

    So that they'll one day notice,

    that it was me striving to be what i am,

    An anointed poet,

    In the working and perfecting hands of the Lord,

    While he is molding and shaping me,

    To be only his poet for all of eternity,

    To bless each soul that comes my way,

    It was you Lord that made me, me
    To others who dont know the real me,

    Look into my poetry and there you'll find me,

    Scattered on the pages of my gifted destiny,
    Which is partly poetry.




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      i love your subject matter. a suggestion, capitalize your pronouns for God. i'm gonna read all your stuff. it's not common to read Christian poetry on secular sites. keep writing.
    trey
    | Posted on 2005-01-18 00:00:00 | by treybur | [ Reply to This ]
      To believe in oneself is what every poet must do. Many of us believe that we were born to be poets, but don't let the idea of being a poet simply feed on itself. Be less introspective and find subjects outside of yourself to write about.
    | Posted on 2004-12-09 00:00:00 | by hanuman | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really good! I like it alot! And as far as poetry goes, Ii really liked your expressions and the flow of words...it sounds good...exsquisite!
    ~Shawnothan
    | Posted on 2004-12-09 00:00:00 | by Shawnothan | [ Reply to This ]
      First let me say, God is smiling big time because of your poem, I know I am. what a goal to be an anointed poet of God,bravo here's an idea to add to your poem, add a line something like, Hear my poem lord, then write a short poem to show Why god would anoint you as his poet.
    | Posted on 2004-12-09 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]
      Sweet. This was very good. very positive. Striving to be yourself is the best healing potion ever. Too many times people try to be something other than themself. They believe it brings happiness but in the end they are not happy. To be yourself and be content with all that you are is the best thing. I am glad that you found this within you and am glad you shared it. This was truly inspirational. Good work! Worth the wait.
    | Posted on 2004-12-09 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]


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