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Sometimes she makes you mad
Sometimes he makes you sad
Both hearts have been used by others
But the sweetest thing is the love that you both have for each other.
Afraid to take that second chance
For you have been on the rollercoaster of romance.
So as both of you walk down the aisle holding hands
You become the greatest women, and he becomes the greatest man
im probably becomeing annoying by now and im sorry for that but the more poems i read by you the more i become intrigued ive only allowed my self to love one person and that was over 2 years ago my current b/f just said those three words and it scared me cause i care for him im just scared to realize how much but this poem has gave me currage in that part so hopefully everything will work out oh well keep up the good work kristen
this is a good piece, i like how it was light, and meant so much. you really put a lot into a couple of words. it's amazing how you can sum things up so easily. keep up the good work, i really think this was good.
This is really special in a way and it reminds me of when Doris jean and I first got married. I felt like she was the only woman that was on the face of the earth. Don't get me wrong I do like to look and she knows it ,but, she was then and still is the only woman on earth for me. so in that way I can certainly relate to what uou are say'n here. Have a great day! !Doc`
Well the whole poem is intended on how you feel. If you really want you know what those lines meant then they meant that you are willing to take a second chance at love even though you have been hurt previously.