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    dots Submission Name: FUCK SKillz Heckle!!!!dots
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    Author: JD_Heckle
    ASL Info:    19/THE Male/Briarwood
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 46/66/23
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
    Total Views: 274
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1276



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       2004 Mutha Fuckas...I'm BACK, Jason Mutha Fuckin Devastation and I'd like to give a shout out to that bitch SKillz...whut up BITCH! and to those silly ass punk mutha fucking gay ass boys...Swill and the faggot Milk, whut up bitches Your disses left me in stitches assholes.


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    dotsFUCK SKillz Heckle!!!!dots
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    Hey Mr. Heckle
    you might hear your neck go "CrAcK"
    and Here's a fact for the nation
    It's Jason Devastation

    forget that fake shit you do
    cause your mind is a ship, sinkin with a loose screw
    always talking about killing sitting cool
    you're just a bitch spilling bullshit from your mouth like drool...
    Mutha Fuck Swill
    Mutha fuck Milk
    and Mutha fuck Big SKillz
    taking all his penis enlargement pills
    sublime rhymes building up on your page like grime
    and this is the time .......for me
    to take the stage and shine

    I never met a "Gangster" who didn't hit a bong
    you try to diss JD well now Skillzo it's on
    you as that hoe the Lich
    need to catch a fuckin hitch
    both of you bitches can go a suck a dead mans dick
    I stayed and helped you build your money stack
    and then you took what I gave stuck me in the fuckin back
    It's funny how some brothers could act some friends
    but tell you to fuck off when they make those ends.
    well now I gotta go and I do hope you never get rich
    so I'll leave you here with this...fuck you and the Lich..




    Submitted on 2004-12-10 21:32:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      well my brother is back and judging by this sorry attempt to bring down my name...he's back with a vengeance. Well why are you trying to diss my now? In any case you need to work on this..
    they whole poem together was very hard to read, and some parts just didn't have a good flow to it. The rhyming was decent, and everything else is simply content. If your intentions were to show that I and the rest of the group have turned our back on you then I guess you got your message out. Anyways I'll see you tomorrow you sorry little Batch
    | Posted on 2004-12-11 00:00:00 | by SKillz_Heckle | [ Reply to This ]
      its kinda ironic since i read this piece right after i read some guy's piece about how we should be optimistic and all that.

    yea... this piece has angst written all over it that it drowns in a not so insulting way. it speaks on its own so you should be proud of that.

    i don't mind the cussing since it works well. what's the point of denying the existence of those words anyway, right?

    personally, i think this rant was built for the sole purpose of bearing the weight of your emotions. it deserves all the respect it can get.
    | Posted on 2004-12-10 00:00:00 | by ANGELO | [ Reply to This ]



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