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Submission Name: I Like to Feel dots

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Author:	cuddledumplin
ASL Info:	32/ f/UK
Elite Ratio:	4.05 - 6191/5840/522
Words:	99

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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I Like to Feel dots

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I'm beginning to think that sanity
Is no longer normal
In this world where children kill
And one bomb can kill us all
How can you not feel mad?
How can you not feel?
How can you go off to work
Singing tra-la-la
When you watched a hundred people die
As you drank your morning brew?
Call me oversensitive, call me mad
But you're the one with the flaw
Because I could not live with myself
If I could watch someone die
Without even a pang
Call me mad, but I have a soul
I like to feel

Submitted on 2004-03-21 03:41:32 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  wow....this was really powerful! I've never really thought about that, but now that I do, it is so (sadly) true. Death and pain have become a common thing, and no one feels for it anymore...
-dandan
| Posted on 2004-04-09 00:00:00 | by Dandan | [ Reply to This ]
  oh... goosebumps... Very well done. I love it. I don't understand people who can just watch tragedies on the news, and show no feeling. I hardly ever watch the news at all, just because I can't watch stories of pain and death without wanting to cry. Numbness saves you from pain, but it bars you from life. Wonderful write, Amy. Fave list for sure. <><
| Posted on 2004-03-24 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
  straong message in so few words once again... great shot at the insensitive people who turn their heads in shame at the world... great writing keep it up
| Posted on 2004-03-21 00:00:00 | by Crash | [ Reply to This ]
  hi! i like the vibe of this, its talking about the sad state of the world but not in an overly-depressing way...good call, without all the drama...well said and it certainly makes me feel! thanks again, you have such a kind soul
| Posted on 2004-03-21 00:00:00 | by leper messiah | [ Reply to This ]
  you've touched a spot. i've had countless arguments (with others and myself) on
how stupidly numb we've all become
vs.
you need to be numb to survive. what's the point anyway of caring if you can't do a thing.
but no matter what the arguments are on the latter side - i want to feel.
| Posted on 2004-03-21 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]
  Bravo Amy! It ain't much for rhyme and meter---but is very long on thrust and has profound impact ( I once knew a guy like that--- ) Thanks muchly---you lay bare the insensitive and media-jaded persona---and for that alone I applaud you
| Posted on 2004-03-21 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]

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