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    dots Submission Name: I Like to Feeldots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsI Like to Feeldots
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    I'm beginning to think that sanity
    is no longer normal.
    In this world where children kill,
    and one bomb can kill us all.
    How can you not feel mad?
    How can you not feel?
    How can you go off to work
    Singing tra-la-la
    When you watched a hundred people die
    As you drank your morning brew?
    Call me oversensitive, call me mad,
    but you're the one with the flaw
    because I could not live with myself
    if I could watch someone die
    without even a pang.
    Call me mad, but I have a soul:
    I like to feel.




    Submitted on 2004-03-21 03:41:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow....this was really powerful! I've never really thought about that, but now that I do, it is so (sadly) true. Death and pain have become a common thing, and no one feels for it anymore...
    -dandan
    | Posted on 2004-04-09 00:00:00 | by Dandan | [ Reply to This ]
      oh... goosebumps... Very well done. I love it. I don't understand people who can just watch tragedies on the news, and show no feeling. I hardly ever watch the news at all, just because I can't watch stories of pain and death without wanting to cry. Numbness saves you from pain, but it bars you from life. Wonderful write, Amy. Fave list for sure. <><
    | Posted on 2004-03-24 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
      straong message in so few words once again... great shot at the insensitive people who turn their heads in shame at the world... great writing keep it up
    | Posted on 2004-03-21 00:00:00 | by Crash | [ Reply to This ]
      hi! i like the vibe of this, its talking about the sad state of the world but not in an overly-depressing way...good call, without all the drama...well said and it certainly makes me feel! thanks again, you have such a kind soul
    | Posted on 2004-03-21 00:00:00 | by leper messiah | [ Reply to This ]
      you've touched a spot. i've had countless arguments (with others and myself) on
    how stupidly numb we've all become
    vs.
    you need to be numb to survive. what's the point anyway of caring if you can't do a thing.
    but no matter what the arguments are on the latter side - i want to feel.
    | Posted on 2004-03-21 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]
      Bravo Amy! It ain't much for rhyme and meter---but is very long on thrust and has profound impact ( I once knew a guy like that--- ) Thanks muchly---you lay bare the insensitive and media-jaded persona---and for that alone I applaud you
    | Posted on 2004-03-21 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]


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