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    dots Submission Name: innocencedots
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    Author: XxMusikJunkiexX
    ASL Info:    18/f/ny
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 109/134/39
    Words: 205
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 895
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1260



    Description:
       inspired by jimmy eat world, my new musical obsession...


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    dotsinnocencedots
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    v:
    For once letís get serious
    Ďcause I donít know how much more I can take
    If you wanna know the truth inside
    Itís gonna be you whoíll end up breaking
    Iím sorry that things have fallen through
    And I canít bring back the years youíve missed
    I can feel your heart beat again tonight
    Címon now, before this moment passes

    c:
    I canít say that this is not my fault
    But youíre not as innocent as you appear
    Watch out Ďcause your haloís glowing red
    And I donít know what Iím doing here

    v:
    I sing this song without any fear
    You can see through me and the lies Iíve spoken
    And the love thatís grown in these darker moments
    Is marked by the angels that have fallen
    The things we want may not be the same
    And the dreams we share may not ever leave
    But one thingís for sure and thatís me and you
    Címon now, letís get out of here

    Chorus > Instrumental Bridge

    v:
    For every action thereís a reaction
    And for every tear thereís a smile
    All the best moments are still to come
    So stay tonight and letís talk awhile

    Ending Chorus(es)




    Submitted on 2004-12-11 16:54:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      yea I do put music to my lyrics, usually with the help of my band members.

    I have band practice today so I'm hoping to get something to these lyrics.

    this song was inspired by jimmy eat world's "work,", so I'm thinking something laid back... but the lyrics i write and the songs that are produced from those lyrics are hardly ever the same so.. we'll just see how this goes.
    | Posted on 2004-12-12 00:00:00 | by XxMusikJunkiexX | [ Reply to This ]
      the talking a while sounds dangerous... im not thinking i would be up for it...

    I canít say that this is not my fault

    but i cant say it is my fault either... thats what it sounds like to me... he (im gonna call him a he for the sake of explanations made easier...) he knows he is at fault and that he has lied and tried to be something he is not... he also knows that he has been discovered and that freaks the hell out of him so he is trying to cover his tracks... deflect the blame... whatever it takes...
    this is a very cool song... do you write music for your lyrics...? what kinda groove are you going for with this one...?
    | Posted on 2004-12-12 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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