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    dots Submission Name: Woman in Tranformationdots
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    Author: AnointedPoetess
    ASL Info:    22/Fe/MN
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 127/178/49
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWoman in Tranformationdots
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    The young woman i long to be seems so far from me,

    But within i see her and it encourages me,

    Her strength and geniuene love for the Lord,

    Is shown in her ever so amazingly,

    Walking with her head held high,

    While her purpose is clearly obvious to the world,

    Christ esteem she has as she looks fofward to heaven as her home one day.




    Submitted on 2004-12-11 22:01:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      allowing Christ to define us and trusting un Him is the only way to obtain freedom. the only way that the christian can live the christian life is to allow Christ to live His life in and through them (gal. 2:20).

    this is a wonderful little piece jam packed with truth, desire and hope. great job.
    ~john-paul
    | Posted on 2006-06-17 00:00:00 | by rev.jpfadeproof | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmmmm. This was good as well. You had a few typos in it but...who cares. You are putting forth a true "transformation" here. You are writing as though you are finally content. That is beyond great. To watch someones work "transform" from depressing to positive is a big step. Keep it up lady!

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2004-12-13 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      that was great! I love the emotion in the words, and the whole message! Keep it up, cuz you have a real gift...dont stop writing! God Bless!
    -Shawn
    | Posted on 2004-12-11 00:00:00 | by Shawnothan | [ Reply to This ]


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