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    dots Submission Name: True Beauty...dots
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    Author: AnointedPoetess
    ASL Info:    22/Fe/MN
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 127/178/49
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       The full title of this is True beauty in Acceptance of me.. hope u all enjoy..


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    dotsTrue Beauty...dots
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    In my life i feel i have many regrets and wishes unanswered,

    But if i look to the one who washed me clean,
    I will see the beauty,

    My life alone is holding,

    Maybe not right now but one day i will,

    See the true beauty my life has,

    Living my life for me and God,

    Striving to be content with God,

    Who made me, me.




    Submitted on 2004-12-11 22:13:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was excellent. You can't help who you are, you can only accept it. It seems like in this poem you became one with yourself and accepted it. That is something everybody has to do sooner or later. This was a wonderful piece. Bravo!

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2004-12-13 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      good job with this one, seems like you really have a connection with your inner self. outstanding. i am pleased to hear someones work that has such a connection. you are a very precise and imaginative writer, keep up the great work! thank you, sincerely, -sinmore
    | Posted on 2004-12-11 00:00:00 | by sinmore | [ Reply to This ]


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