Heh heh. Thank you *smiles*. The third poem only, in my lifetime, that has been written for me. You are truly a friend, and I respect that. Devastating with the kindness that I send eh? *smiles* Well, as you have seen, that kindness has been on vacation these past few days. If on1eday.co.uk syas anything else to me, heh...I will break him. Simply put, and move to another poetry site.
One shouldn't have to deal with this. That idiot has 3 poems written. I have 487 written to date, plus anoth 613, which shall never be posted. I just felt, disrespected that he would comment...he's no poet...
But you didn't write this to hear me rant. I am just getting some things off my chest . It felt good to hear these words as read aloud. I can't comment on the form or anything, for one it was a limerick . And secondly, because this was something personal, something to be prided in, for it was from the Heart. I Thank You, and do Take Care.
If more people were like you rather than the foes you aim to devastate, the world would be a much better place. And I like how you seek to teach your friend to kill with kindness rather than 'throwing punches.' Nice job. I don't think I've ever seen such a short piece from you. You did a great job-how does it feel?