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.:The Spell Your Heart Cast:.


Author: Timmy S. Edgar
ASL Info:    38 male Melb, Australia
Elite Ratio:    2.6 - 263 /200 /71
Words: 256
Class/Type: Poetry /Happy
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Sometime you travel through life wondering 'When is it my turn?' 'Where is my soul mate?' for some it never materialises yet for the lucky few when it happens it is generally by suprise how wonderful it is to find such special people


.:The Spell Your Heart Cast:.



I love the way we met, how it happened for us
One minute our lives empty no there was nothing
Then without warning; There you are, you appear
So sweet with your nature; so caring, so loving

I have been waiting patiently for you see Hun
That’s right, I had spent many a day, crimson sunset
Diligently Preening; whilst learning love for thy self
The focus on preparing my heart, matched positive mindset

They’d always say to me “it will happen wait & see”
Am I here to learn patience; Is it my only destiny
That for this life time on earth, for me to learn
Then your heart a spell did cast, your soul set mine free

I bless your presence in my life, so much so I’m thankful
And cherish the time that we have spent so much so
That my heart inside my chest pounds a tune of happiness
With you my life just seems so right together old we’ll grow




Timmy S. Edgar © 2004
http://www.eliteskills.com/u/Timmy%20S.%20Edgar

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My Personal Favourites Poems:

http://www.eliteskills.com/z/3005 <--[Wishes Three]
http://www.eliteskills.com/z/2998 <--[Small] & Bonus Piece <- [Kiss Me Timmy]
http://www.eliteskills.com/z/2980 <--[The Park]
http://www.eliteskills.com/z/36342 <--[I Thank You]
http://www.eliteskills.com/z/38368 <--[Statements]
http://www.eliteskills.com/z/38423 <--[Heart Felt]
http://www.eliteskills.com/z/2823 <--[Cats]
http://www.eliteskills.com/z/36170 <--[If I Was...]
http://www.eliteskills.com/z/38339 <--[ Talented Romantic Poet Guy]
http://www.eliteskills.com/z/38426 <--[They]



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  I dont think anyone could read this and not walk away with a heart of warmth and a huge smile etched on their face. It always a wonderful feeling when you meet someone you know you were destined to meet. You expressed it all perfectly...I wouldnt change a thing ...

Blessed Be...
Krysti
| Posted on 2004-12-14 00:00:00 | by Krysti | [ Reply to This ]
  i liked the writing.It's wonderful. I truely hope you have found your special one the person that makes you truely happy. you talk about their soul setting yours free and that their heart casts a spell on you. It makes me think aobut my situtation
| Posted on 2004-12-13 00:00:00 | by janedaq222 | [ Reply to This ]
  does this mean you found your soul mate? well if you did congratulations, your luckier than most. I think there are more of us out there in the world that haven't found that person, than those who have, and the lucky few are what gives "hope" the true meaning. ~ Candi
| Posted on 2004-12-13 00:00:00 | by Broken Angel | [ Reply to This ]
  This was beautiful. Time tells everything. When you look for love it isn't there. When you just live day by day you find it. You did a great job writing this. I hope that it is true and you have found that "special one" for you. It is wierd to wake up one day and be alone then wake up the next day and be in love. It happens. Most of the time with the wrong person. Great job writing this. I like positive poets.

Li Li
| Posted on 2004-12-13 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]


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