Some pessimistic note...Although it's short, anyway it is impressive. The idea could be that...you want somebody to listen to you, but noone does...and you feel all alone...:?! Lonely phatom with a screaming soul...longing for understanding, well that what comes to my mind...great, great, I like such themes...
this was a good piece i like how you wrote it. although it was to short for me, i still favor this one for today. i guess this is about how people feel that they are non existant like a phantom.
Silent essence Nothin more And sometimes Something less
this connects to how people feel when they are ignored, rejected-un-noticed. you wont "mar the phantoms".. you wont disfigure that feeling of being left alone. this is something anyone can connect to, or easily type about. yours was a bit harder to analyze and connect to my philosophy--experiences, so i really enjoyed this one.
I don't quite understand this poem. The rythm is good. It was easy to read. Just not easy for me to understand. Yet, that's not hard. I am easily confused. So here I am commenting because I always comment no matter what. Plus you always comment on mine so I'll Pay it back.