You have very aptly and whimsically outlined every man's fear of not awakening and finding out that you didn't. I really like the lightness of this poem and all said in so few words. Very well done I am going to add this to my favorites.
i like it. short, optimistic funny and yet a bit foreboding for there is a chance that u might not be there.did u ever think if udied even if tey put a mirror next to your face u would not know even if he is there u would not be. nice write.