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    dots Submission Name: Here Again (Revised)dots
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    Author: arkay
    ASL Info:    50+/m/Atl.Can
    Elite Ratio:    4.84 - 450/320/56
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
    Total Views: 996
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       A lot of misconception on the first write.
    This should better explain my dilemma. ;)


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    dotsHere Again (Revised)dots
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    Here Again


    Every morning
    When I awake
    To my mirror
    I hastily make
    To meet my friend
    Whose eyes of glee
    Are always happy
    Just to see me.

    For if hes not there
    Then where am I?




    Submitted on 2004-12-13 18:32:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You have very aptly and whimsically outlined every man's fear of not awakening and finding out that you didn't. I really like the lightness of this poem and all said in so few words.
    Very well done
    I am going to add this to my favorites.
    | Posted on 2004-12-16 00:00:00 | by popsit | [ Reply to This ]
      i like it. short, optimistic funny and yet a bit foreboding for there is a chance that u might not be there.did u ever think if udied even if tey put a mirror next to your face u would not know even if he is there u would not be. nice write.
    | Posted on 2004-12-14 00:00:00 | by whyme | [ Reply to This ]


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