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    dots Submission Name: Specialdots
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    Author: Kera
    ASL Info:    18-f-NH
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 116/129/29
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       whatever, I dont care anymore.


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    dotsSpecialdots
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    Should I feel special
    because you care?
    how about this, do you feel special
    because I care?
    Do you know the feeling?

    You say you dont tell me things,
    because you dont want me to hurt;
    but not telling me is hurting 10 times worse.
    You can tell me anything,
    but you seem to still hide.

    What can I do to prove everything I say?
    I am young and nieve, just a stupid child,
    with great feelings, hopes, and dreams.
    That is something I will not hesitate to say.

    I am jelious of you, so very envyious.
    I dont knwo how you pretend all is ok
    and still kill inside.

    Well here you go...I do feel secial.
    So very special.
    But all who care for you,
    I think it blocks out the specialness,
    of me even noticing.

    So here I am, Invisable,
    only here cause you cared.




    Submitted on 2004-12-13 21:22:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great poem, If anything maybe just needs a little spell checking, Great work though, I look forward to reading some more of your work along the line

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    Krysti
    | Posted on 2004-12-13 00:00:00 | by Krysti | [ Reply to This ]


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