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    dots Submission Name: Walk Worthilydots
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    Author: realpoet
    Elite Ratio:    6.51 - 904/475/311
    Words: 198
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Just thinking about Why would a God want to have anything to do with us ficle beings.


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    dotsWalk Worthilydots
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    Walk worthily and remember
    Tender the child though stormed His path
    All kingdoms lurk within His wrath.
    He came to give of peace and joy
    From brutal wars sustained by pride.
    He tenders you on battlefields
    A salve to hurts and cure of wounds
    True sense of love and fortitude.

    He came not with shoulders of pride
    Though proud were slain by His own stride.
    He gives out gifts' true reward
    Though He the receiver should be.
    He bends and cleans the floors of souls
    And shines them brightly with His grace.
    He paints the walls of sties and mires
    And gives His strength to overcome.
    He creates a mansion within
    And parcels out His love tax free.

    Oh, shout with joy morn of His birth
    Reach and cradle Him in your soul;
    He'll make invisible your sins.
    Great joy,there is great joy untold
    Be thankful, rejoice, this His Day.
    He shouts the world His certain say:
    If I be God who walks your way
    Can stiffle pride though powerful am,
    Why reach for skies above your realm,
    They confuse and they overwhelm.
    Remember Me,I come again
    To you steadfastly by my side.





    Submitted on 2004-12-15 00:36:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Praise God!

    I can truly appreciate this papi.

    You are truly blessed beyond compare.

    Truly beautiful.

    I look forward to reading more inspirational pieces like this one.

    Wynne Devereaux
    | Posted on 2004-12-20 00:00:00 | by Wynne Devereaux | [ Reply to This ]
      now that's a genuine new piece with alot of work in it and it is well organized , and well described.. strong and powerful words , and your language is excellent from what i can see.. very very well done , keep it up :)
    | Posted on 2004-12-15 00:00:00 | by Tarek Refaat | [ Reply to This ]


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