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    dots Submission Name: Longing For You, Lorddots
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    Author: AnointedPoetess
    ASL Info:    22/Fe/MN
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 127/178/49
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 1123
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    dotsLonging For You, Lorddots
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    In the midnight hour,

    Needing that special touch,

    From the only one who can love me right,

    Feeling like a world wide princess and only in his presence do i dare stay,

    In my searching,

    I long for your face to show me that everything will be ok,

    Soft smile i long to see so that i will no longer have to go on crying,

    Out of the pain, hurt of my past,

    Which to you Lord is no more,

    And you continually see me for who i am,

    A princess striving to be a queen at heart,

    Only with and through you.




    Submitted on 2004-12-15 00:43:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is the shortest, truest, beautiful piece!

    I'm glad that I stumbled across you via li li.

    I realize that was a short comment and mostly it was praise but...how can you fix what is not broke?
    | Posted on 2005-04-07 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]
      well that's some very deep feelings you have there, well done in expressing yourself , its short but goes right through the heart , well done keep it up :)
    | Posted on 2004-12-15 00:00:00 | by Tarek Refaat | [ Reply to This ]
      very good! this was a sweet prayer to the Lord, and I could really sense all the emotion that went into it...you have a gift for writing. Always use it! All the best!
    -Shawn
    | Posted on 2004-12-15 00:00:00 | by Shawnothan | [ Reply to This ]
      beautifully written poem. it certainly tells a great story of how we depend on God! great work here. you seem to be very close to Him. that so wonderful too.
    | Posted on 2004-12-15 00:00:00 | by MMISS | [ Reply to This ]


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