heartbreak resounds through the hearts of the broken
carrying the burden of memories
like a turtle carrying his home on his back
slowing the pace of dreams
while minds lay akwardly upon the pillows
of phantoms
clouding the senses
with the cologne of the one
we once held dear
a war of words with the chess pieces of regret
placed strategically upon the battlefield of lips
ensues with the thunder of archangel shoes
keeping eyes open with an insomnia curse
this is the first poem that i read this day... and im having a lonely day... i just broke up with my girl this morning and i can truly relate with this line:
carrying the burden of memories like a turtle carrying his home on his back
nice poem... i can see the imagery, the struggle of both party.. nice one! keep it up...
well that's such a great piece of work you have here and your descriptions are phenomenal and makes ones imagination flow to other directions and picture what you are thinking of , a very well done piece of work
Submission Name: heartbroken memory
