i also like the lines "It opens doors But Iím still A whore To hypocrisy"
i can't understand why anybody would do that, sell their soul, sign away their life. and i love how you touch on the hypocrisy of being sophisticated and yet, still being a "whore". maybe i'm taking it the wrong way... anyway, i thought this was really very good. there is another poem on this site (can't think of the name of it right now) that deals with prositution and the like, if you want to know the name of it, i can tell you later if you want to read it for yourself.
It opens doors But Iím still A whore To hypocrisy These are my favorite lines. Nice analogy. I think any women can be sophisticated no matter what she does. Society does paint a portrait of what we should be and how we should carry ourselfs. I think that is bull [censored]. No man sitting in the white house (or any house) can judge me for what he thinks I should be. Women get missed judged a lot and it makes me pretty angery if you couldn't tell already. Nice poem I enjoy the topis and description there of. keep it up. Tameson