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    Author: ceteure1
    ASL Info:    18/m/nigeria
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 6/10/6
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 218
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       The inspiration to write this poem came from the scene of a murder some months ago....whereback in my university as i watch the "guy's" corpse been carried away after rival cult groups killed him that afternoon in school....


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    He lays lifeless
    As sympathiers watch his helpless Corpse
    Not knowing what to do
    The university he had come
    Now he leaves
    Without an accomplishment

    He had long being here(university)
    Here he is;
    With a liveless heart
    On the place he had longed for

    What a world,
    Our campuses had turned into
    Where students turned killers
    My heart bleeds for this generation
    Oh! when will the killings end?

    Academic pursuit seeketh all of us
    With one vision
    Why then this killings?
    Oh; students of likemind
    Let's stop the bloodshed
    For the future is ours

    We cannot but build a loving heart
    And see our dreams come true
    We must set a pace
    For generations to come
    For in our campuses
    Lies the foundation
    Let peace reign today.






    Submitted on 2004-12-15 12:42:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      * now he leaves without an accomplishment...
    Has he really? Does his life show in your work as to suit a purpose? As does my work on Child abuse, if I stop an belived I live though that for no purpose then my life for 29 years has been worthless. He served to put the word out on how life is there. It is a shame one must die to get the word out and I am sure if given the choice he might not have chosen that, but we shall all pray for peace. Sometime life does not give us a clear path so we have to tramp around in the fog until we reach daybreak. Don't get lost in the fog, have faith in yourself to know it will clear. Take care and I will be reading more of your work. I would suggest in your writing, to release your anger more. I feel so many trapped emotions let them flow through you and unto your paper.
    Dana
    | Posted on 2004-12-15 00:00:00 | by raptures | [ Reply to This ]



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