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Author: POETRY
ASL Info:    17/f/az
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Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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This was what me and my best friend had went through when he went out with my best friend and he knew all the feelings I held inside for him


She passed them by as they were holding hands
She walked pass trying not to cry because of all the pain she held inside. The love her life was not just a friend but her best friend who also knew of the feelings she had for him was with her best friend. He cronfronted her saying hes sorry but ... nothing

"how could you do this to me you knew how much I loved you and you decided to leave me for my best friend"

"I am sorry I just liked her so much that......"

"WHAT?! so much that you decided to sacirfize what we had... I mean I know I could never be your gurl and I know she can give you things that I can not but you had lost the only thing that ever meant anything... dont you feel any regret?"

"Yes, but I fell for her and you can't help who you fall in love with."

"Yeah, your right because if I could have I wouldn't have fallen for you!"

"you dont mean that"

"Yes I do I mean it because you hurt me. You use to say to me that you would never hurt me or anything that would come close and you did you used me to get to her was this your plan from the start?

NO RESPONSE as he looked face down

(mubling to herself)

I knew I shouldnt have done this again fall for someone who I knew I couldn't have especially it being my best friend


"Nothing I was talking to myself .....look I dont want to do this but you left me no other choice I have to let go ...we shouldnt talk to eachother anymore."


"BECAUSE JONATHAN.. I dont want to hurt anymore what you did hurt and never whould I think so much pain could come from you someone who I had loved in so many ways
I am sorry but its over between us."
She slowly walked away refusing to look back as he screamed her name " CHRISTINA CHRISTINA CHRISTINA." As she walked away the screaming began to fade in the background.

She sat up in her room doing nothing but crying because the only one she ever really loved has now left her side and she is dying inside. Later that night he had called

"I am sorry I was stupid I really dont want to lose you as a friend..."

"Thats where you should have thought twice about what you did"
(out cracked a long moment of silence)

"So... I lost you?"

"No Jonathan...(a quick moment of sobbing) because you can't lose something you never had."
She had finally hung up the phone and learned to let go. The next couple of weeks she ignored his calls and ignored him at school but really he was all she could think of. She now longs for the guy she had felt she ahd let down when really it was the other way around. Now she sits at home all alone wandering what he is doing right now.......

Submitted on 2004-12-15 19:30:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Hm. The storry i suppose works, in taht I can believe it happened. I dont know if i agree with the views of either of yall tho. For instance, you certainly can control who you fall in love with - its called self-control. Also, i really do belive its better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all. The feeling of love is distinct from actually having somebody to love, and its worht just as much, so u proly wouldn't wanna not fall for him if you could do it again - u'd be missing out. I do think its good that you had the strength to cut him loose. I think its the right thing to do because thas what i do. Lately though, I question my wisdom sometimes.
| Posted on 2004-12-30 00:00:00 | by particularshard | [ Reply to This ] is all i can say. a tear is flowing down my cheek this very moment. this seems so familiar... so heartbreaking...beautiful piece... absolutley beautiful i hope this hasnt really happened to you and if it did im sorry... tennage love is probably the hardest of all you dont know where to turn to and there's so many people's heart at stake i think you handed this situation wonderfully keep it up
| Posted on 2004-12-26 00:00:00 | by withouthope | [ Reply to This ]
  wow, lemme get the tear out of my eye, so emotional , so ...just my life, i had an identical expreience where i had to let a girl like that go...( my poems tell my lost love) love is a terrible thing to waste, you piece is an excellent example that things dont go the way people want them to. great job , keep up the good work! ...
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| Posted on 2004-12-16 00:00:00 | by Solemn Star 88 | [ Reply to This ]
  Oh man, that is quite the emotional piece. I can't exactly say I cried, but you know that feeling you get...I could definitly feel the emotion seeping from this dialogue. A very unique style with this one and I did enjoy reading it. Oh also...I don't mind you you put me on your stalk list...take care and keep in touch...

| Posted on 2004-12-15 00:00:00 | by Geremy Smith | [ Reply to This ]
  She passed them by as they were holding hands
She walked pass trying not to cry because of all the pain she held inside. The love her life was not just a friend but her best friend who also knew of the feelings she had for him was with her best friend. He cronfronted her saying hes sorry but ... nothing

that made me tear up great write take a look at my poem called "boy and Girl"
| Posted on 2004-12-15 00:00:00 | by shattered_dream | [ Reply to This ]

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