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    dots Submission Name: Why?dots
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    Author: Linz
    ASL Info:    24/f/Ne
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 86/118/44
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 674
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 405



    Description:
       This was written for my boyfriend shortly after we got together and obviously when we started saying I love you. I didn't see why he would say it so i asked and this was his response and my response back.


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    dotsWhy?dots
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    I asked why you love me
    you gave a few reasons why
    mostly the way I look
    maybe even the way I smile
    Hoping for some different answers
    Like my personality

    All the reasons given to you
    Never had looks
    It was so much more
    Clear down to the core
    Next time I ask you
    Hopefully there will be a better answer in play.




    Submitted on 2004-12-15 20:36:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Good. i like to see people who put thier thoughts into poetry and mix things up a bit, well done, i hope that you hear those words out of his mouth, and live happier than i have been, good luck and nice job...
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    | Posted on 2004-12-16 00:00:00 | by Solemn Star 88 | [ Reply to This ]
      Well being told how you look for the reason for loving you not bad or good in fact not to put down you boyfriend but it is kinda vain. Overall good write. And I hope the next time you ask he gives you a better answer.
    TGA
    | Posted on 2004-12-15 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]


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