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    dots Submission Name: The Fickle Musedots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe Fickle Musedots
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    You're my only foul weather friend.
    You only visit when I'm miserable:
    on those too drunk, too sleepy, too sad nights,
    you are my only companion,
    but when a smile curls upon my lips,
    you run like a vampire
    that's been flashed with a crucifix,
    so, I'll wear my sadness
    like a badge of honor
    and write my soul away.




    Submitted on 2004-03-22 00:18:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Faust comes to SC...
    It's all a deal, a trade-off to find that metier in which you can give up what you must.
    There is supposed to be suffering for one's art - is there not?
    If it was easy and pleasant I would be reading trite saccharin, wouldn't I?
    Hasta,
    K
    | Posted on 2004-03-22 00:00:00 | by Awkward | [ Reply to This ]
      like the woman in the photo with the piano. she is the muse. but that photo doesn't strike me as happy. but maybe? it's funny how it's so much easier to write during 'gloom' than anything else. when i am "happy" i am not usually sitting still enough to write something. i've gotten out of the habit of equating writing to that 'gloomy' or whatever it is and chalked it up to the writing itch. it's there and then not.

    neato thought.

    ghost.
    | Posted on 2004-03-22 00:00:00 | by myghostsliketotravel | [ Reply to This ]
      Boy do I know that feeling...I thought the third line didn't work properly, maybe if you moved the location of words, like "On those nights too drunk, too sleepy, too sad". I love the vowel rhyme between lips & crucifix.
    | Posted on 2004-03-22 00:00:00 | by boompatah | [ Reply to This ]


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