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    dots Submission Name: Becausedots

    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    I write because I'm not like you.
    I feel too much.
    I write because I'm a sadist,
    and want you to feel my agony.
    I want you to know the ugliness,
    but I can't give too much away,
    so, I take my pen
    and spew forth my ache
    but only a ration,
    for art is born of pain,
    and I hope you get a sick pleasure
    from this pinprick of my hurt
    when my sorrow is a sword wound.

    Submitted on 2004-03-22 04:11:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ooh! my! There are no words to accurately describe such artwork. "only a ration"... how true... for if the pain were fully cleared, from where would your inspiration come? It's good to write this stuff down... (I'll stop before I start the "must be experience talking" stuff!) Nice write, cuddle. <><
    | Posted on 2004-03-24 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the theory..but probably enough hurt to keep you writing for years without the rationing... Another good one.
    | Posted on 2004-03-22 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this poem. I really like the last line. Thank you for sharing it. I hope if your sad that things get better. Keep writing it always helps.
    | Posted on 2004-03-22 00:00:00 | by PryncessVynom | [ Reply to This ]

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