Description: I got to meet this girl in school weeks back and must confess that she's one in a million....however, it might interest u to know that she just can't date me because she believes too much in "numbers"; she's two years older than me.......hope i'll meet the gilr that will make my dreams a reality.
my mind's eye -------------------------------------------
In my mind
Do i envisage u
Oh u, who i just can't help
But think of
For jewels like u
are not easy to come by
But how then where u entrusted in my hands
that remains the many wonders of the world
For i melt often a time
When i see
Burn in my inside
When u speak
And just can't utter
When u smile
For i wish for nothing else
but to behold your lovely face
Feel your soft hands
and bow to those charming smiles of yours
oh u,
who's brought a change
I really liked this poem..though I think maybe chaning the "u's" to "you" might help on the emphasis of this writing a little more. Other than that it was quite the piece with it's own unique taste.
Submission Name: my mind's eye
