Hollowed Graves of Freewill
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The beginning has no rhyme...but towards the end it starts to gaina rhyme...this was purposely done. Other than that, you can take this writing for what you think it means.
Comments and feedback would be great..Thanks.
Comments and feedback would be great..Thanks.
Hollowed Graves of Freewill
Conceived on the story board Of an anthem shattered Hotel Descriptive eyes peeling The bark of inner sanctity embraced Calloused fingers dance So timidly over the face Lacking perfection Eyes shaded with blood and grey Forcefully churning the heart Tongues latched against cheeks Embedded with shards of glass Showing the sheep what to adore The graves of freewill beam A radiance of brilliance So sickening A stomach turned sourly sore Because somehow I lost my way Fingers suffocating My eyes of filtered decay All that I’ve ever fought to keep is all that I have to leave There is something I have to say here --before I fade away Forever there’s no tomorrow Trapped in mirrored freewill Yet we do this all over again Gripped by routine circumstance Worn…and hollowed again All along, here I was told That we could open up, so bold --our eyes where in the safety dies Because forever we will be Yes, we will be borrowed Hollowed again. |
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| I don't get it. The title intrigued me as sounding like something good, but I think it's a little too obscure. Too hard to catch the meaning. Yes, we will be borrowed Hollowed again. This last line is the only one that gives me a sense of what you're trying to say. (I think) | Posted on 2004-12-24 00:00:00 | by blood heart | [ Reply to This ] | I don't know if I quite understand the subject. But, what I got was that your eyes were becoming tainted by society? Maybe I'm wrong but if that's it then awesome. But, maybe you could explain it to me if that's not it? | ~BCute | Posted on 2004-12-23 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ] | |
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