I'm sorry
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The quote at the top was my semi inspiration...the other was a friend threatening suicide after we broke up...It's scary to think I could mean so much to one person..
I'm sorry
“What I really meant to say is I’m sorry for the way I am. I never meant to be so cold.” -From "Cold" by Crossfade I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to hurt you I didn’t want you to cry I never wanted you to threaten to die… I’m sorry, Put down the gun Come back into my arms I don’t really love you But I’ll play pretend a little longer if it’ll keep you alive I’m sorry I couldn’t kiss you when you came down to see me And that I couldn’t say that I loved you Or that you’re my ‘one and only’ I’m sorry, Cuz I can’t play games any longer My heart’s not with you And it’s killing me to lie I’m sorry, But it’ll be okay…I promise…. …please put the gun down… I’m sorry I’m sorry I’m sorry |
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This is one of the saddest poems i ever read on here. My heart does go out to you and your friend. I hope things do get better. I think this was a wonderfully written poem. It has so much emotion in it, but i kind of see some anger mixed in. It was well written. This person doesn't belong in a relationship if he can't accept what may happen after. I mean people change right. I hope everthing goes well for you.| | Posted on 2005-01-22 00:00:00 | by MiKkI25 | [ Reply to This ] | Good job portraying this horrible scene...you took a saddening situation and turned it into a nice flow of words and I applaud your efforts. Even though your tone and mood was so dark and remorseful, I enjoyed reading this...nice images...I can see this guy crying and cradling the gun waiting to make that final move. I know you were deep within a wave of emotion when writing this...it shows in your descriptions. Very touchy, very sad...but I like it. | ----------wandering | Posted on 2004-12-17 00:00:00 | by wanderingpoet16 | [ Reply to This ] | This reminds me of a crazy baby momma or something. They can't ever just let go. I know a few. This was well written. I don't see anything that really needs worrying/changed. Keep it up. | Li Li | Posted on 2004-12-17 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ] | i enjoyed reading this piece. it was a great write and i'm sorry about your friend. it must suck because he's in a hospital now, but it's not completely your fault if a person can't handle the trials of a relationship. | | Posted on 2004-12-17 00:00:00 | by passion4poetry | [ Reply to This ] | wow if this is a true story you must be an amzing person if someone wants to die over you. I thought this was really sad but a very good poem. Hope this person didnt die | | Posted on 2004-12-17 00:00:00 | by Devadair | [ Reply to This ] | Some people just cannot deal with having relationships, the forming and the breaking of them in life, sad your friend was such. Glad he is recieving the help he needs hopefully. This had to be a very trmatic event to go though in your life...this work is well written and great wording, ofcoarse from something actually lived it always is, wish you the best of luck in the future. | Alan | Posted on 2004-12-17 00:00:00 | by MidnghtScorpion | [ Reply to This ] | |
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