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    dots Submission Name: The Sweetness of Helldots
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    Author: Raksha
    ASL Info:    16/female
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 75/67/29
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 291
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    dotsThe Sweetness of Helldots
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    Oh sweet revenge
    my holy grail.
    The innocence that lay before me,
    my hands stained of sins,
    thier blood forced by my fate.
    It led me through the dark-consumed me,
    then decieved me in an instance of a blink.
    I hold now the horror of time.
    Their sweet smiles and thier glowing hope conversed.
    Death lingered right past them
    as I stood laughing.
    The laughing and chuckles
    echoed further and further away.
    Slipping past and in and out of
    the lands.
    Filling the mountains,haunting the forests,
    and killing as it surgered on endlessly.
    For a sweet revenge.




    Submitted on 2004-12-17 21:34:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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