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    dots Submission Name: Damndots
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    Author: UNunderStood
    ASL Info:    16/f/oh
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 79/87/25
    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
    Total Views: 768
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    Bytes: 245



    Description:
       ahhh i wrote this cuz i use to cut and it is like a drug you really dohave a hard time quiting
    and now i really hate looking at the scares i left on my body so i wrote this to explain it to people who don't understand me
    please comment


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    dotsDamndots
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    nerves,
    as you grab your object.
    shakey,
    as you place it on your wrist.
    numb,
    as you cut.
    calm,
    as you bleed.
    scared,
    when people see.
    Damn why the fuck am I doing this to me!




    Submitted on 2004-12-18 16:30:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem is fairly clear and straight to the point. It is easy to relate to, because alot of people, including myself, have cut as some point. It's good that you write it to help otehr people going through some similar problems. But you shouldn't be ashamed of it, because now you can tell people that your strong enough to get over that kind of addiction.
    | Posted on 2005-01-12 00:00:00 | by lost_and_forgotten | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah I liked it too ...I used to cut too ..and ive been clear for a year now ..and everytime i wear a skirt i look at my thigh and just hate myself for doing it ...but everynow and then ...i get upset ..and the urge is back ...
    People dont usually understand that its a full on addiction ..and it can almost make you die inside when you resist doing it...
    Great little piece ...you expressed it well
    Blessed Be
    Krysti
    | Posted on 2004-12-18 00:00:00 | by Krysti | [ Reply to This ]


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