OKay Rachel I am sorry for everything, honestly I have no bad feelings for you, thanks for writing on my poem and I wrote it to sort of try and forget about this other guy David, he kinda reminds me of Joey which is completely irrelevant but anyways I just wanted to say I am cool with you and the reason it hurt so bad when I lost Joey was because I lost an entire family with it, Angel was like my mother and honestly it probably bothered her more than me but it's okay because it all worked out for the best, if me and Joey hadn't broken up I would never have created all the art I did or get to know David. I really hope you guys are happy and maybe could be friends, if Joey thinks so much of you, you must be awesome.
man that is really sad. I love the way you speak so plainly and linear story telling here. It is very very sincere and almost exudes sadness. Definitely a heavy somber piece. I think it is all the little details that really give this poem life and I personally loved it.