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    dots Submission Name: .:They:.dots
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    Author: Timmy S. Edgar
    ASL Info:    38 male Melb, Australia
    Elite Ratio:    2.6 - 263/200/71
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Joke/Them
    Total Views: 1106
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       This is about as abstract as i have ever been i alsao hav another poem call 'It' which ill post accordingly



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    dots.:They:.dots
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    Who are They Baby?
    Cause no-one seems to know!
    Yet they seem to know all the answers
    No more to say..Not so!!

    Who are They?

    That, them, they, theyíre tight
    Thatís what They may say see
    You canít win as They are always right!
    If only we knew; well maybe!

    Tell Me who are They?

    They tell the average Joe
    All the things that he donít know
    Stand Up! Donít be a conformist
    Cause a riot, make a difference, and Raise your fist



    hehehe thanks for reading this poem :P




    Submitted on 2004-12-19 02:01:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      yes i thoguth it was interesting as well. a little odd perhaps...^.^...but still very interesting! lol. i like the last part. not conforming to society's expectations.
    | Posted on 2004-12-19 00:00:00 | by darkness child | [ Reply to This ]
      So who are they???

    This sure is an interesting poem, makes me wonder who you are talking about. Cool, LOL!

    -P1
    | Posted on 2004-12-19 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ]


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