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    dots Submission Name: "Weeps of the Willow"dots
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    Author: kjb
    ASL Info:    23/male/NY
    Elite Ratio:    3.35 - 256/351/64
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       for the socially broken.


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    dots"Weeps of the Willow"dots
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    Why does the willow weep?
    Its tears flowing down its lonely leaves
    the branches twirled in knots
    maybe it has the small pox
    or the willow is suffering from scarlet fever
    it is niether
    what the willow suffers is only curable by
    a couple of strong ties
    it needs friendship
    then it will have someone to satisfy those lips
    and parch those weeps
    to hold those lonely leaves
    and untie those those social knots
    then the barriers will be droped
    the willow will then weep in joy




    Submitted on 2004-03-22 18:29:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow. God all your early poems seem to relate to what we talked about Friday night. *sighs* Jeez. It's like you knew you were gonna meet a psycho like me.
    | Posted on 2004-10-24 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]
      ...a tear like droplet of water, glides down the spiraling leaves, distracted only by the ripple in the water below, of the tear shed before it... man... insperation is the tip of the iceburg...
    | Posted on 2004-04-07 00:00:00 | by Rue | [ Reply to This ]
      This is nice... it paints a pretty image of a weeping willow in my mind.
    | Posted on 2004-03-22 00:00:00 | by Cai | [ Reply to This ]



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